Saturday, December 7, 2013

100 Word Challenge Kalzang

…And then the noise stopped, the lights went off, and there was a stampede of people, rushing to get out of the building; it was a fine hotel, almost five stars: there were at least one million, mystic, mosaics decorating the facade.

When everyone evacuated out of the hotel, there was a peculiar man who looked as if he didn’t care about what had happened, no one saw him, he was like a sanctimonious, slithering, serpent, and a professional saboteur.


While I was in my plane going back to London, I couldn't stop thinking of that man, why did he do that?

1 comment:

  1. What an interesting way to interpret the prompt, Kalzang. I liked how you had the sound stop right at the beginning, and then told about what happened next. Good words to describe the man -- 'sanctimonious, slithering serpent.' Yes, the reader too is left wondering why the man did this.

    Ms. Sargent
    Team 100 WC -- USA

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