I staggered back and forth, side to side,
struggling to stay on my feet, as the wind shoved and tugged at me fiercely,
hunting me like a beast. My heart was beating incredibly fast and banging
against my ribs. I held on to the side railings, desperately trying not to fly
of the bridge. Something moved in the passage of me. Something quick and
scuttling like a rat. Suddenly a gush of wind pushed me off the bridge. I tried
to hold on with my hand. Just as my fingers were slipping off the railing,
something caught my hand...
Ishika- this 100WC had me on the edge of my seat! your first sentence is excellent- it really sets a scene! You've used some lovely words in this blog- and I love your cliffhanger!
ReplyDeleteFiona (Team 100WC)
Thanks for the encouraging comment! (-:
ReplyDeleteIshika, since you have been participating in this 100 Word Challenge your writing skills have improved dramatically; the quality of this entry could easily be found in a published novel. I am very proud of you.
ReplyDeleteMrs T
Thank you Mrs T!
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