I was drinking afternoon tea and having some toast and enjoying the relaxation.. After five minutes, I heard something rummaging sound. It was weird. I thought it was Milky. Well, Milky is my baby bear.
It was too loud for me to relax, so I just stepped outside to see what was happening.
My bear was in the corner of my garden. He was digging the ground as if he was pushing through the earth. I went near him, not knowing what he was doing. I couldn't believe it when I saw this. There were a hundred tiny bears in the hole!
It was too loud for me to relax, so I just stepped outside to see what was happening.
My bear was in the corner of my garden. He was digging the ground as if he was pushing through the earth. I went near him, not knowing what he was doing. I couldn't believe it when I saw this. There were a hundred tiny bears in the hole!
Yuina,
ReplyDeleteThis was a lovely and well-thought out 100WC. You used sentence structure and punctuation really well, and the story flowed at a good pace from start to finish. Well done!
Emily, Team100