But when I put the batteries in it, it
started to zoom off like a rocket launching into space! But, instead going up,
it went down breaking through walls and down to the kitchen were my mum was
cooking; she glanced up, oh, oh I knew I was in big trouble.
When I told dad about it while we were
walking home, he started to guffaw; everyone on the street conjectured or just
thought that he was a very outlandish man.
When we arrived home, dad hurried to the kitchen, looked up, and there was the large gaping hole!
Cool!!
ReplyDeleteFantastic vocabulary Kalzang!
ReplyDeleteI am very impressed.
Mrs T
This is a confident post, Kalzang, although your dad seems to be a pretty mellow fellow not to object to your destroying the home with improvised missiles. You need "where" for "were" in line 2, but as "were" is a word in English the spellchecker won't have underlined it - so always read though before posting. Keep it up!
ReplyDeletethank you,and i will check next time!
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