When my shoes get smaller, I always buy my new shoes in a small shop that is painted in red.
I really like it. The shopkeeper of that shop was Mrs.Honey. She was so kind to me.
Two years later, I went to Mrs.Honey's shop. I gasped. I couldn't believe it. ...The shop was destroyed. There was lots of dust inside. Carefully, I looked inside, there were the same shoes that I had! Also, there was message on it.
It said,
" Dear Lilly，
Think you for coming to my shop! Unfortunately, I have to go to another town...
Bye."
Mrs.Honey
I really like it. The shopkeeper of that shop was Mrs.Honey. She was so kind to me.
Two years later, I went to Mrs.Honey's shop. I gasped. I couldn't believe it. ...The shop was destroyed. There was lots of dust inside. Carefully, I looked inside, there were the same shoes that I had! Also, there was message on it.
It said,
" Dear Lilly，
Think you for coming to my shop! Unfortunately, I have to go to another town...
Bye."
Mrs.Honey
Hi Yuina, well done with this 100WC - I like how you've managed to tell a complete little story. You've really shown how shocked you were with the sentences, 'I gasped. I couldn't believe it...' I wonder why Mrs Honey had to go to another town, have you thought why?
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really good 100wc Yuina!!!
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