Out Dark, is a world never seen, heard or even thought of;
but one day I sat on the cold wooden bench as a substitute for the final of a
baseball game. Now you will be thinking… “Oh,
there is nothing wrong with this silly story!” No! The referee blew the
whistle, we won the game, but deep inside I didn’t care about winning, let
alone liking baseball! The thing I liked the best in the world was secret
forests and caves. After the game I ran straight to the woods, but when I put
the batteries in, the portal disappeared.
Hi - well done for writing such an imaginative story for this week's 100 WC. I really like your opening, it hooked me in from the start. Great work :-)
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Yanni,
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic ending! I never imagined that 'Out Dark' would turn out to be a computer game.
Keep writing...
Mrs T
cool 100wc! (but i thought you were going to put football?)
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