Escaping, without any benefit
Running
through the forest, my mind started flashing the past; of how I found the power
of mind-control, and how an agency gad caught me. They had caught me; and threw me in some sort
of juvenile prison for about three weeks. I had nearly turned insane in there -
Suddenly the pain in my arm - Gratefully; there was one flaw in the security.
They had programmed it in a way that no ordinary teenager could break out. But I
was no normal teenager; and I will never be. I had reprogrammed the security;
and broke out. But they won’t give up without a fight…
Rishikesh, I really do think that you have a talent for this 'action-packed' thriller genre. The opening sentence immediately places the reader in the drama of the moment. followed by a narrative that provides some information, but no answers to the questions that begin to form in the reader's mind...
ReplyDeleteNever give up writing, Rishikesh.
Mrs T.
Thanks a lot, Mrs.T
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