The
Sun came out?
Unfortunately, it was raining much too heavily to even step outside.
The raindrops banged against the ground, forming a harsh sound. The rain hadn’t
abated for 5 hours.
I was overjoyed when finally the sun came out!! And with it, a magnificent
rainbow appeared, stretching out over the country. Many people say that there
is a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow, and I was determined to find it. I
set off, building hope upon hope.
However, my dreams were shattered when I heard my mum. I found myself
sitting up in bed, looking at the evanescent beauty of the sunrise.
What a wonderful descriptive piece of writing. I love all the adventurous vocabulary you have used here such as 'abated' and 'evanescent' . You do wake up and it is a dream but in this case, this idea works well. Thank you, I really enjoyed reading this excellent work.
ReplyDeleteMrs Prior - Team 100WC
Your choice of vocabulary is outstanding. I particularly liked the phrase 'Many people say' - a very useful sentence opener to have in one's writing tool box!
ReplyDeleteIt is always a joy to read your work.
Mrs T,