Suddenly the
pain in my arm grew as the rock thrust deeper into it, much like a sword
willing to take my life. Only, this time, it wasn’t the stone to blame. The
figures took one of my hands each, and with the stone still pinned into my
right arm, they dragged me over to the side, threatening to drop me from the 12th
floor balcony of my house.
Determined
to win this battle, I bit the hand covering my mouth as hard as I could, and
heard a scream. Then a knife harshly pierced my stomach, and I heard another
scream, this one from myself…
Goodness me, this is a thrilling piece of writing! What an impressive selection of action-packed phrases: thrust deeper, pinned into, dragged me and harshly pierced my stomach.
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Mrs T.
Thank you Mrs. T!
ReplyDeleteWow what a fantastic entry for the 100WC! Your fantastic use of vocabulary had me hanging on every word. What an action packed story. I would love to know what happens next.
ReplyDeleteI love the ending when you say"I heard another scream,this one from myself".This is a fantastic entry!
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