Sly entered the house, trying to be
really, really intrepid. He knew that this house was haunted by ghosts and
vampires. He was examining the house, he heard something fall, and then he
looked all around the place. He saw a silhouette
which looked like a vampire.
It approached; you could see its
vicious fangs, cadaverous cape, unruly hair... Sly thought that the vampire
would drink his blood. It came closer until... Sly had tools in his backpack,
and unusually, some garlic. Sly took it and
showed it to the vampire
The vampire went traumatized, and then
ran away.
Phew, Sly was lucky!!!
Nice!!!! I liked the word traumatized!!!!!! I would not like to visit this house!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat plot, describe the moment a bit more and it'll be perfect.I really like the vocabulary used and the sentence at the end.
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