Usually, my trip to college is very
tedious, only today it was quite enthralling. All I was doing was cycling on
the pavement; first
of all I caught sight of a tortoise
that remarkably was orange.
And then guess what? I noticed a funny clown with a red honky nose.
As
time passed, I came to see that I had reached my groovy college (I
find the college groovy, others don’t). Anyway to sum up the whole
bizarre trip, I saw my unrivaled friend, I waved to her senselessly. The bell
rang … Oh no; I am late for college again!!!
What a whacky bike ride! I like the way you've woven all of the words into your story through the use of the bike ride to college and you have used some really interesting vocabulary. I'm not sure groovy is quite the word you want to describe your college, you could find something better. I also wasn't sure what you meant by 'my unrivaled friend', and 'senselessly'. Otherwise - good work, well done!
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