In the preyed upon Night Zoo lived a
bloodthirsty and a malodorous vampire. Down his mouth,
blood would trickle like water erupting out of a fountain. You would not like
to know how the monstrous creature eats, the second I tell you, you will vomit
in disgust. How gruesome is that? On the other hand the way he gobbles food up
in his throat is quite captivating. One
thing that you must always remember
about vampires is that once they get you, you will never again be able to take an
insignificant fleeting glimpse at your Family and Friends.....
Great writing, Eesha! I like your use of vocabulary like bloodthirsty and malodorous.The simile that you have used is also quite effective in describing your creature. I would not like to be near that vampire!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks!!! I don't think I would like to go near that vampire as well!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat description and great vocabulary.You have described the vampire so well that after reading this a feeling of disgust ran up my throat.The question to the audience is a great way of involving the audience,I agree with Driti that the simile was quite effective!Keep it up!
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