Saturday, October 26, 2013

Week 8 BISB Yanni Brussels

Ah! Oh sorry, I forgot to tell you my name, I’m called Rattle; I’m a penguin and work in the zoo. You might think that people won’t let me because I’m an animal, but I am dressed as a person who is dressed as an animal. See, in our zoo there are guides who are dressed as animals for effect but I think that’s tedious
Two days later
Ok I will start again!

Ah! There are loads of humans coming to me!  Guess what, they took off my two costumes, discovered that I was a penguin and put me in a cage! 

2 comments:

  1. Marvelous twist at the end. Could you describe Yanni a little more? What kind of penguin is he?
    Mrs. Vreeland@Team 100

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  2. Wow,I really liked your story,good use of 'tedious'.

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