Hey! My name is Josh, and, um… the
most amazing thing that has happened to anybody in the history of the world has
happened to me. To begin with, I saw a shooting star and then I wished that I
could… fly! Please, can I fly; not this time.
Two weeks later…
You know what? I’m flying! Looking down, I was surprised to
see ducks. Then they flew away and then
I saw two thousand different sized ducks heading towards me Then I wished I was back home on my bed. Whoosh! “Come on
you will be late for school”!
Yani I really loved your opening line. Flying dreams are always neat and fun too bad this one couldn't come true. Also great job using the ellipsis.
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