Saturday, February 22, 2014

100 Word Challenge Armand

The Antraluc mine
The Antraluc mine was an old coal mine in Belgium. Now it is blocked but you can still visit it, and that is exactly what we did with the school.
I wasn't sure if it was the best day to visit that monument.
When we arrived at the coal mining a noise coming behind me
“Crch, crch”
I wasn't comfortable, so I decided walk a bit quicker, but that noise was following me
“Drrr, drrr”

Scared to turn my head and look, I returned in my group hoping I would be safe when I saw a shadow...

1 comment:

  1. This is a great tense work of flash fiction. I wish I knew what could make noises like "crch" and "drrr". Keep up the good work!

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