Snowstorms have ruined it all. I was listening
to the radio when I heard the man blabber away, “Snowstorms and blizzards will
be occurring whenever they like these 3 months. Therefore it is dangerous to
even step outside the house. You have to do all your grocery now (for 3
months). What will we do? “Will school and offices shut down?” continued the
man on the radio. Meetings were held across the country to find an answer. My family
was congested in front of the radio, flabbergasted. Everybody started carping. “IT’S
THE END OF ME!” I squealed. I will not be able to stand the groaning of my
family for 3 months!
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ReplyDeleteWhat a clever idea, I enjoyed your story. Being stuck inside during a snowstorm is fun at first but it does get old quickly. Great story, keep writing!
ReplyDeleteThank you Eesha for this thrilling piece of writing! I am so pleased that you are taking the time to find more adventurous vocabulary: congested, flabbergasted and blabber. I know how you feel about listening to people groaning!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work.
Mrs T.
Hello Eesha, I enjoyed reading this challenge very much. I loved your simple choice of opening sentence, it sets the scene perfectly and leads the reader straight into your story. I also loved the final moment, when despite all the drama of the snowstorms and their effects, your character is most worried about managing long term close contact with their family! Well done :)
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