There was a problem in our country. The problem was a gang of people, stealing things or great amount of money. The name of that gang is called 'Black Stars'.
All of our country knew Black Stars, however the police could not caught them.
After a month, meetings were held across the country to find an answer to how the Black Stars escaped so often, and how can we could catch them.
Three month later, a famous mayor found out that Black Stars has a special secret gadgets that enabled them to escape from anyone. Therefore, it is very hard for police to catch them. Can we solve this mystery?
All of our country knew Black Stars, however the police could not caught them.
After a month, meetings were held across the country to find an answer to how the Black Stars escaped so often, and how can we could catch them.
Three month later, a famous mayor found out that Black Stars has a special secret gadgets that enabled them to escape from anyone. Therefore, it is very hard for police to catch them. Can we solve this mystery?
Dear Yuina,
ReplyDeleteI think that you deserve an award for devotion to the 100 Word Challenge! I know that you are back at school in Japan at the moment, so well done for sending this entry. The quality of your writing is improving every week; you now use a range of sentence-openers and more sophisticated vocabulary such as enabled and and therefore. I am sure that this could be an adventure for Alex Rider...
Keep up the great work.
Mrs T.