It was very dark. We were stuck in a cave. There was nowhere
to escape. BOOM! There was an explosion. We couldn't figure out where the
explosion came from. Suddenly we spotted a faint white light at the far end of
the cave. We slowly walked towards it. As we walked more lights appeared red
and yellow. It was so mysterious. We still continued to walk. There were lots
of obstacles. The road was uneven. Rocks
were peaking out very sharply. Some parts of the floor was shattered into
pieces. We got a clear sight of the intense white light.
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In your story you make me feel that I was stuck in the cave with you, riely impressive.
ReplyDeleteThere is a lot of suspense and particularly like that, well done!!!!
You used wow word, word that you don't use commonly, good riting.
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