Finally, I
always dreamed to go to a park, today my dream became true. I was going to a
park called “Mysterious”! In the park there are lots of automates and games. I
chose a curving path that led to a “magic” labyrinth. In the labyrinth there
were mysterious bright lights and wrong curving hilarious mirrors. The alleys
looked like long mischievous passageways. The tall walls were made out of
greenish trees. It was very hard to find an end to this maze. I was a bit
frightened. The reason for that was it was cruelly dark. Just then the yellow
house appeared high in the sky…
WOW! Maria, very amusing 100 word challenge! You described the labyrinth with lots of adjectives. Your use of punctuation was just correct! I liked the way you ended your story with an ellipses. Good job!
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