CATS
I was in my room, reading a book.
Suddenly I heard a sound. It sounded like a purr. So I checked my bro’s room if
he was watching anything with cats in it. He was sleeping. I asked my mum if our neighbor with the annoying
cat came over. No, but I heard it. Mysterious. But this time it was
coming from my room. I crossed the bathroom and then suddenly I heard a shriek.
I put my ear to the door separating the corridor from the bath.
And then the door opened and a familiar orange cat stepped out.
Well done for using the prompt words. I like the way you can hear the purring and are trying to find out where it is coming from.Where had the cat been hiding I wonder? Jane Hewitt team 100wc
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy reading your work, Rishikesh. Your style draws the reader into the story; excellent variety of sentence length. Mrs T.
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