“GOOD MORNING!
Out of bed all-o-you” Ms. Green said “get ready and rush for breakfast.”
Blankets flying across the tent and cushions on the floor and night gowns
thrown on the sacks. That’s how the day started. That’s what Easter morning
looked like…we rushed and brushed and bathed. Camp clothes on and off we went
for an ‘Easter Day Out’. First we looked for the hidden rabbit holes. After we
found 20 rabbits we went on a chocolate treasure hunt. Two groups; two hunts.
“59, 60, 61….looking at all that chocolate mmmm
Yummy! ….” The scrumdiddlyumptious browns hastily melted away.
Hi,
ReplyDeleteI really like your choice of verbs. They really add detail and up port the readers imagination of what the scenes might look like. Well done.
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Eera, you have described the scene so well; it reminded me of what awaits me at Rippledown in a few weeks... This is an enchanting Easter story which I really enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Mrs T.