If we share our belongings with you, will you be happier
than you are now? Instead of wasting our
food we can give it to you or other poor children. Some people don’t think
about this fact; they don’t care; they want everything to themselves. However
you don’t need to be that kind of person. If you share, even the tiniest
amount, the world will become a better place and people like Andualem, will be
much happier and will be able to live in a better environment. Sharing makes
all the difference and you can be part of it to.
Divij, this is a powerful piece of writing; you are quite right, some people don't care and only think of themselves. I think that your direct tone is ideally suited to this genre.
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