Saturday, September 28, 2013

Week 4 100 Word Challenge Yanni

Nobody knew, but one day a pot appeared in the middle of the park.  What time of the day you may ask?  When dawns first rays of sunlight came out.  However this pot was going to do something HORRIBLE!!!!!! At exactly 12:00, all the people next to the pot were sucked up! You could only see the legs wiggling and the veins coming out!!  How disgusting!   Finally the police came to the rescue and dropped the pot in the sewers, but then it grew until it was massive. but then it felt dizzy and vomited all over everybody.  How disgusting!
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3 comments:

  1. BollywoodBISBSeptember 29, 2013 at 1:30 AM

    Excellent use of repetion of 'How disgusting', as well as using a different font!

    Keep up the good work, Yanni

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 30, 2013 at 3:45 PM

    Hi Yanni, good 100wc. I liked your use of the question and your idea that the pot sucked people up. Keep up the good work. :)

    Lauren - Team 100wc

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  3. EeshaOctober 4, 2013 at 9:02 AM

    Cool!Nice!

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