When I left the house
I was so angry that I wanted to jump on something!!! It had been a long day at
work whilst remembering that my family had forgotten my birthday! I was fuming. Anyway, I continued down the main road and
then I turned left to my street. When I was about 60 metres away from my house
I stopped, and then I saw a bright light...
Was it a police car? No, it could not have been. But when I walked closer, I saw it was just my
family wishing me a happy birthday!!!!! Happy Birthday!!!
Well done Sara for using the short sentence for dramatic effect, and also including a question to the audience.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work.
Mrs T.
(TEAM 100WC)
ReplyDeleteHi Sara, well done with this 100WC. I like how you've used a mixture of different types of sentences and different sentence starters to make your writing interesting. I'm glad it had a happy ending :-)