A mysterious pot of legs.
On November 29
2012, my family and I planned a trip to Paris. We arrived at 11 o’clock. Whilst
we were walking, you would never believe what we saw! What do you think it was?
It was an
angry pot! The pot was made of wood. I was very interested, so I moved closer
to the pot and I felt warmer and warmer! I looked in the pot and I saw that
there was metal inside, in addition to this, I saw a magnet. In conclusion, I
saw three miserable prisoners walking towards the pot…
Your imagination works in mysterious ways, Maria; I want to know who the 'three miserable prisoners' are...
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Keep writing!
Mrs T.
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