It was a dark night… It was scary and then suddenly I
heard a crack…
I heard it, with this voice: BOO!!!!!
The voice sounded very strong!!!
Then, all of a sudden I saw a monster, then the phone
rang…
The monster came in and I was very scared!
I found a pan and threw it at him!
It crashed on the monsters head!
The monster fell down!
But before he died, he asked for paper and a pen.
Then the monster wrote a letter:
I am dying…
Then the monster was dead!
At that moment, relief spread through me!
Well done Maria,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very poetic piece, well done.
I find this a little hard to follow, I think it needs more of a setting. But well done for using lots of punctuation - may be a bit too much though.
Well done for throwing a pan - a good choice!
What a good start to the year!
Andrew
Team 100wc