Saturday, September 28, 2013

Week 4 100 Word Challenge Eesha

Hi! I’m Lucy. People say that I am the laziest person on the planet, but that’s not the true. The place where I live is in a busy, colourful city. One evening, towards the end of summer, the phone started barking like mad. I picked it up.  An exhausted voice whispered,” You won a ticket to Paris!” I became over-excited.

The following day, I visited Paris; I saw a score of shopping malls and restaurants. What did I see? A bloody, pot of legs. Suddenly I saw a cruel man with a knife; he was walking towards me... Oh No!!!
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  1. AnonymousSeptember 28, 2013 at 1:01 PM

    Eesha what an interesting story that starts out so fun and hopeful, but soon turns into a bit of a horror story. I like the first person introduction at the start of the story, nice touch. I also like how you described the phone as "barking" - good creative writing! Keep up the good work writing on the 100WC.

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  2. BollywoodBISBSeptember 29, 2013 at 1:47 AM

    The previous comment about 'barking' confirms to me that you listened attentively to our Literacy lesson this week. Well done, Eesha, for using new skills.
    Super work.
    Mrs T.

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