I was buzzing to go to Paris to do some pleasant shopping.
When we arrived at the hotel it was exactly 8:15, instantly, I went to sleep.
The next day, we went to see the Eiffel Tower, followed by a walk in the park
and had a scrumptious French ice cream. We walked, till... I saw this pot full
of legs. My mum dropped her ice cream - it was pot of legs with the legs
covered in veins and blood. What was that??
Trembling, we walked back to the hotel and went straight
back to England the next day.
I really liked your opening sentence ...I was buzzing to go to Paris. Great range of punctuation and I am pleased to see that you are attempting more adventurous vocabulary.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Mrs T.